So Long - A Short Poem by Kevin Brower-Franklin

4.5 Stars - A Masterful Expression of Emotional Growth

"So Long is a poem that aches with honesty and hope. Franklin captures the nuances of romance—the passion, the heartbreak, and ultimately, the clarity that comes with letting go. His words are poignant, his rhythm precise, and the overall effect is profound. A true testament to the power of poetry to heal and transform."
– Daniel West, Author and Critic

2 Stars - Overly Sentimental and Predictable

"So Long aims to explore the themes of love and growth, but it falls into clichés that dilute its impact. The metaphors feel overused, and the emotional arc is predictable, offering little that hasn’t been said before. While Franklin’s intentions are clear, the execution lacks the depth and originality needed to truly stand out."
– Mark Holloway, Independent Critic

1.5 Stars - Too Vague to Resonate

"Franklin’s So Long struggles to connect due to its vague language and lack of specificity. The poem hints at deep emotions but never quite delivers, leaving readers to fill in too many blanks. Without a stronger narrative or more vivid imagery, it feels more like a fleeting thought than a fully realized work."
– Sarah Collins, Literary Enthusiast

2.5 Stars - Lacking Depth and Focus

"While So Long has moments of lyrical beauty, the overall piece feels scattered and unfocused. Franklin attempts to tackle love and self-discovery, but the poem doesn’t dig deep enough into either theme. It’s a surface-level exploration that might appeal to casual readers but leaves those seeking more substance unsatisfied."
– James Porter, Poetry Blogger

2 Stars - Emotionally Flat

"For a poem that promises to delve into romance and realization, So Long feels surprisingly flat. The emotions feel more told than shown, and the rhythm lacks the energy or cadence to draw readers in. It’s a decent effort, but it doesn’t leave much of an impression."
– Olivia Grant, Book Reviewer

1 Star - Uninspired and Forgettable

"Franklin’s So Long reads like a collection of platitudes strung together without much cohesion or originality. The poem tries to evoke deep emotions but ends up feeling uninspired and forgettable. There’s potential here, but this effort falls short of delivering something truly impactful."
– Ethan Morales, Critical Reader